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Rainbows on Fire. CHTP 2

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    I no longer felt pain.  I felt dizzy in my head.  Is this that it mentally feels like while going to heaven?  I don't know.  I then felt my mind starting to gain control over my body.  I opened my eyes, only to be blinded by sunlight.  I felt like I was on grass, and the smell of open plains filled my nostrils.  I must've been dumped out somewhere in California.  As I slowly sat up, my eyes began to adjust, and I saw a small, dark opening a short distance from me.  

    I got up, and walked blindly over there, and I didn't stop until the coolness of the shade, and then I opened my eyes.  One thing was obvious, this isn't California, before I folded my arms looking down.  What I saw shocked me: around my wrist were violet bands with a lavender trim, both glowing, and that's all I need to know what happened; I must have been brought to this world, now as my Sonicsona, Firetron.

    As I started walking I paid attention to anything, that I can see, smell, and hear.  Good thing that this body's shoes has a unique design, since I'm gonna be walking for a while.  As I continued my walk, I noticed an unusual sound.  Something like a whooshing sound.  I looked up and saw a rainbow trail.  I looked back down disappointed, but then something hit me: that trail can only be made by one character: Rainbow Dash!  I quickly turned around, shouting out "help" as loud as I can.  I knew I was saved.  Soon my hope quickly began to fade by the second.  She didn't didn't turn around.  

    I sighed in disappointment, as I walked on from where she came from.  I continued on for another few moments, until I heard the flapping of wings behind me.  I turned around once more, seeing a 4-foot-tall Pegasus pony with rainbow-colored mane and tail, rose-colored eyes, and a three-colored lightningbolt on her flanks, standing about ten feet from where I was standing.  

    "You called for help?" she asked.

    "Yes" I said.  She then smirked as she came up to me at a trotting pace.  

    "Well, I'm your rescuer!" She said once she got beside me, striking a pose.  "Name's Rainbow Dash!"  

    "I'm Firetron." I replied.  

    "So...you live in this place?" the pony asked, looking at me confused.  

    I thought about what to say to her; that I got teleported here, or got dumped here.

    "I somehow got teleported here actually." I said, looking a bit hurt.  She then opened her both her wings with the sound of silk flapping in the wind as they whooshed open.

    "I'll give you a lift to Ponyville.  Just hop on, and hold on tight!" She exclaimed.

    "I never rode a Pegasus before." I said as I choked on my fear.

    "I'll go easy for you." he replied, with a grin.  No argument there. I slowly got on her slick back, wrapping both my arms around her smooth neck for additional support.

    "Ready?" She said, getting into her take-off stance.

    "Yeah, just don't go too fast, okay?"

    "Okay!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed again, before jumping into the air, flapping her wings as she ascended with her mane blowing wildly in the wind.  I held on even tighter with both my arms and her legs, trying not to slip off.  As what I thought was thirty seconds was only a few seconds, and we were flying about 200 feet above the ground.  I still held onto her neck, still scared of the wind trying to blow me off.

    "Hey, it's gonna be alright, Trony!" Rainbow shouted over the wind.  I slowly loosened my grip on her, feeling the air currents flow by my arms and face, which was rather a bit screwed up from the wind.

    "See?" she said.  "No need to be scared."

    "I never flew like this before!" I hollered back.  The pony laughed, making me bounce a bit on her back.  "You'll get used to it!"  

    It was rather a windy trip back to...her hometown.  I only felt her soft, slick, coat, and her silky mane whipping about in my face.  From time to time, I look over my shoulder to see her tail lash around in her wake.  On the way there, she did a few stunts, such as a barrel roll, and a quick loop.  Good news, no Sonic Rainboom.  Bad news, I almost threw up on Dashie's back, literally.  Only a bit of my vomit got on her wing, but was quickly blown away by the wind.  She must be flying REALLY fast!  As I looked down to the forest, I saw it fly by with great speed.  

    "You know, you're doing a good job at not letting me fall" I said, trying to get my voice into her ears.  

    "And you're doing a good job at riding!" She replied back.  I laughed at that comment. "True, but this is also my first time bareback!"

She slowed down a bit.  "Really?" She asked, looking over her right shoulder to me.  "Well, you must had A LOT of practice!"

    "Actually, I didn't." I hollered.  The pony looked at me surprised, then shrugged.

    "Have you went high?" She asked.

    "Pardon?"

    "Have you flown high before?"

    Crap!  I was afraid that she might ask me that!  Even though I went up like 40,000 feet on commercial airliners, and about 100 feet above ground via zipline, but so far, I only went 200 feet above the surface on the back of a Pegasus pony!

    "Well...only a little." I lied.  She's saving me, and I'm lying to her, but I don't know the measurements of the Equestrian world.

    "Won't hurt to go higher!" She shouted as she suddenly pulled up.  I can only cling to her mane as she sped upwards for a couple seconds.

    "Are you trying to make me fall?!" I yelled at Dashie angrily.

    "No, I was trying to go higher!" she snapped back.  I can only hunch down behind her neck, just to hide, but it was a VERY stupid thing to do, since she already knows that I'm on her back.

    "Sorry 'bout that" I said.  She looked back to me; her rose-colored eyes were soft with innocence.

    "Me too." She apologised.  I couldn't help but smile.  A tomboy, or "Tomcolt" already apologising to me, but not just anyone, but Rainbow Dash.

    "Ooh!" The pony gasped.  "There it is!" she pointed her right hoof towards a small town.  Ponyville, I thought.  I then felt ourselves descend.  The ground slowed down as it came up to meet us.  After a sudden jolt, and a bit of a gallop, Rainbow Dash landed without even throwing me off her back.  I slid off, and thanked her.  First time in the town, and everyone, or everyPONY, as they say it, seems confused about me.
It's been stuck in my mind for a while. Also, I'm still working on this, bit by bit, so please be patient.
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Good, but one thing. Horses and ponies are measured in hands, not feet. 1 hand = 4 inches.